Write a letter to the city councilor to inform them about a traffic problem in your local area

Essay topics:

Write a letter to the city councilor to inform them about a traffic problem in your local area.

Dear Sir,

I am writing this complaint letter regarding the traffic congestion in the KPHD Phase 2, Nellore city, Andhra district.

Due to small roads, we are facing a big challenge in terms of traffic. Traffic lights are not working. Additionally, there is no traffic police. This Junction is a center for Schools and colleges due to this heavy traffic in the morning and evening. Due to this children’s, youngsters and parents are facing problems. Some people are blocking the road without seeing the other vehicles in the center.

On the half of the people belongs to this area, we request you to take necessary actions on this traffic jam problem. Could you please help to establish the traffic lights near the junctions? In addition, please appoint at least a traffic police to control the people and not to follow the traffic rules.

I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convince. Thank you in advance for your kind cooperation.

Yours Sincerely,
James

Votes
Average: 8.2 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this complaint letter regar...
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Line 5, column 258, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ffic in the morning and evening. Due to this children’s, youngsters and parents are ...
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Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur kind cooperation. Yours Sincerely, James
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, regarding, so, at least, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06666666667 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57824478845 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.951820666 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.3076923077 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6923076923 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183079802058 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652860632487 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375064234294 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103415747429 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310520743488 0.0580467560999 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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