There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park.
Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter:
introduce yourself
describe the importance of the park
say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in the hope that Local Council does not sell the park.
I am Harshit Munjal. I am an international student. I am studying Business Accounting at Alberta University second year. I came in Canada in 2018. I live in Apartment on rent near to the park that is selling by Local Council but am not agree with this plan.
Park is located just 50 meters away from my home, When i return to my work, i love to sit in the park, listen the sounds of birds chirping, sometimes i like to play football, badminton and Cricket that keep me fit and healthy. Before going to work, i prefer to do Yoga allows me to remove my stress, offers relaxation and calmness. All in all, this park not only helpful for me but also for my neighbors too.
On the significance of this park, i would request to Local Council do not sell this place. I would be grateful if you listen my request.
Your faithfully,
Harshit Munjal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... sell the park. I am Harshit Munjal. I am an international student. I am study...
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Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... Munjal. I am an international student. I am studying Business Accounting at Albe...
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Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ting at Alberta University second year. I came in Canada in 2018. I live in Apart...
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Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... second year. I came in Canada in 2018. I live in Apartment on rent near to the p...
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Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
... is selling by Local Council but am not agree with this plan. Park is located just...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...from my home, When i return to my work, i love to sit in the park, listen the sou...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...the sounds of birds chirping, sometimes i like to play football, badminton and Cr...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... fit and healthy. Before going to work, i prefer to do Yoga allows me to remove m...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...o. On the significance of this park, i would request to Local Council do not s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 770.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46209467813 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622857142857 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4810746957 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.1666666667 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5833333333 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08333333333 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262524436846 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886642119369 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105258976942 0.0603063233224 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190980073182 0.12726935374 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858256590901 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.