There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: introduce yourself describe the importance of the park say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan
To the editor,
My name is Teawo Kim who lives near Central Park for two decades. I heard the news that the local council is planning to sell Central Park due to a financial crisis and I would like to need a little help from you.
I believe the importance of the park is very significant. The park plays an important role as an inhabitant for various wild animals as well as a rest area for an enormous number of seasonal birds. In addition, it is the only place local residents can escape from harsh city life and enjoy the view of mother nature. I assume that you and other employees in your company also enjoy the park very often.
I have noticed that the local council wants to sell the park as soon as possible without dragging too much attention from the public. Thus, I really need your help to write an article related to the matter for the morning newspaper so that everyone knows that their park is in danger.
I am looking forward to hearing your answer.
Best regards,
Teawo Kim
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
To the editor, My name is Teawo Kim who lives near Cent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, thus, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47826086957 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22428064453 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603260869565 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4153198767 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 4.34317383033 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33552563429 0.216113520407 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117645887481 0.0766984524023 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849877381947 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179973603495 0.12726935374 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933371446429 0.0580467560999 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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