you are unhappy with the road quality nearby your home. write a letter to complain about the same to city council.
in your letter
introduce yourself
describe the situation
say what you want the officer to do for you.
Dear Municipality Commissioner,
The objective of writing this letter is to express my sheer annoyance about road quality nearby my home. Actually, i am Harman and living in 45 Model Town, Sirsa 125505 India.
The road starting from my society to main road is full of dumpy drive. Moreover, roads have too many deep potholes and rough edges. The rainy water is collected in these holes. My society members encounter various health concerns such as malaria, dengue, vector borne diseases and many more as collected water in potholes gives birth to hosts of these illnesses. What is more, last month my royal state organized a clean city competition. My city was unable to win this competition just because of awful roads.
Hope you understand the state of my town and would consider it as priority. Please repair or construction new safe roads in my city to curb the problems caused by below par quality roads. I solicit your action in advance and looking forward to receiving your response on it.
Yours sincerely,
Harman
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Comments
sir,evaluate this letter and
sir,evaluate this letter and give your feedback about my writing style.
Essay evaluation report
about road quality nearby my home
about the road quality nearby my home
I solicit your action in advance and looking forward to receiving
I solicit your actions in advance and am looking forward to receiving //and 'solicit' here may not used properly
flaws:
for every requirement, like: 'introduce yourself', try to give at least two points or two reasons. for example:
1. i am Harman and living in 45 Model Town, Sirsa 125505 India.
2. i have to drive to office through this road daily...
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 173 050
No. of Characters: 826 1200
No. of Different Words: 121 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.627 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.775 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.443 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 54 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 40 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 26 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.308 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.614 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.308 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.316 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.605 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.057 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Municipality Commissioner, The objective of writing this letter is ...
^^^
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... road quality nearby my home. Actually, i am Harman and living in 45 Model Town, ...
^
Line 5, column 292, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ue, vector borne diseases and many more as collected water in potholes gives birth...
^^
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our response on it. Yours sincerely, Harman
^^^
Line 10, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nse on it. Yours sincerely, Harman
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, look, moreover, so, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53494406144 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.705202312139 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2802077945 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0833333333 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4166666667 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1735445718 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594672944343 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495522576532 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882664818506 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654484980787 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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