There will be a traditional celebration in your country and you want to invite your friend
from an English-speaking country. Write him/her a letter and
- invite your friend,
- explain what happens at the party,
- describe the tradition and why it’s important in your country,
- say why it is important for your friend to be there.
Dear Elaine,
Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing this letter
to invite you to celebrate our traditional festival Deepawali with us this year. While we
were studying together last year, you promised to visit me and believe me, this is the best
time of the year to come to India.
Deepawali is our national festival. It falls in October or November. It means rows of lights. It is celebrated to commemorate the return of Lord Rama to
Ayodhya after fourteen years of exile. This is one festival which all Indians celebrate. A
month before Deepawali, we whitewash our homes and buy new clothes to wear on that
day. On the day of Deepawali, we worship Goddess Lakshmi, the symbol of wealth and
also burn crackers. There is lots of fun and frolic.
Ever since I finished my course at Leeds University and came back home, I have talked so
much about you to my parents that they are all very eager to see you. Moreover, it will
help you with the project you are doing on ‘Globalisation and Tradition’. You will see that we
Indians have not forgotten our traditional celebrations even if we have become a part of
the global village which is influenced by the western culture.
We would be honoured to have you as our guest for your entire stay here. You are
welcome to bring your parents along if they can spare the time. I assure you we will make
it a memorable holiday for you.
Hoping to see you soon!
Yours lovingly,
James
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 32.9175257732 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 268.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77985074627 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60808617566 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611940298507 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 290.88556701 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.13402061856 186% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9589597433 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1666666667 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8888888889 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.61111111111 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.29896907216 419% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 7.41237113402 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193704834552 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569767820312 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617553342923 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.052589245644 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561198956211 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.