A while ago you have lent a friend a suitcase, which he/she has not returned yet. Write a letter to him/her reminding to bring it back and say
- What suitcase and when dud he/she borrow it?
- Why do you need it back?
- What should he/she do about it?
Hi Tom,
Hope and wish that you and your family are doing well. I guess you enjoyed the trip to Australia, send me some snaps you took there.
Hey, do you remember the Samsonite “Soft Lite”, blood red colored suite case, which I gave you for your trip? As I had no plans of travelling at that time, I gave it to you to avoid you spending more on luggage as your budgets were tight during that time.
I and my wife are travelling to India for our annual vacation by next week. The suit case which I lent you is the one which has a higher capacity and comfort. My wife had shopped a lot of items to be taken back home and already my two other suitcases are stuffed up. So I am badly in need of the suite case for my travel.
This week is going to be a busy one due to my back to back official trips across the country. Could you please help by dropping the suit case at my home during your free time? Alternatively I can ask my wife to pick it up from your wife when she is available at home.
Please text me if you need any stuff from India, while coming back from vacation. We will meet after I am back from vacation. Cheers!
With Regards,
Simon Dickson
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi Tom, Hope and wish that you and your family a...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., send me some snaps you took there. Hey, do you remember the Samsonite &apos...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...budgets were tight during that time. I and my wife are travelling to India fo...
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Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...xt week. The suit case which I lent you is the one which has a higher capacity and...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eed of the suite case for my travel. This week is going to be a busy one due ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... wife when she is available at home. Please text me if you need any stuff fro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while, i guess
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.18340611354 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13429483236 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606986899563 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.0683187057 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.4285714286 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3571428571 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175221923732 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616811506622 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367070529557 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101534788522 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146446999748 0.0580467560999 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.57 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.