You are going to spend your vacation in a city in a foreign country. You have never been there before. Your cousin has a friend who lives there. Write a letter to the friend. In your letter
• Introduce yourself
• Say why you are making this trip
• Ask some questions about the city (e.g. places to see, things to do, things to bring)
Dear Sam,
Please don't get surprised by receiving this letter. my name is Deepa, hardik's sister. he is my first cousin. Last week, when we met during lunch I shared that next month I'm travelling london for the first time and that's when he mentioned about you and assured that I can rely on you in this stranger city. I'm writing this letter to you to get more information about your magnificent city.
As I said earlier, this is my first ever trip to london, very excited, thrilled and can't wait to explore the city for fortnight. However, I have booked the accommodation at dormitory near downtown sub station. It would be great help if you can share some more information about the city.
Firstly, I would like to know which places can I sightsee churches, museum and river or bay view where i would go and relax. To explore more, can you also share me about any night life clubs to enjoy and have fun. Lastly, where to go for shopping to buy souvenirs, chocolates and etc.
I'll be eagerly waiting for your reply. also would like to say, thank you in advance for sparing some time to answer my questions.
Hoping to see your prompt feedback.
Your's Faithfully,
deepa
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
Dear Sam, Please dont get surprised by receiving this letter....
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Suggestion: My
...get surprised by receiving this letter. my name is Deepa, hardiks sister. he is my...
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Suggestion: He
...tter. my name is Deepa, hardiks sister. he is my first cousin. Last week, when we ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...t during lunch I shared that next month Im travelling london for the first time an...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ravelling london for the first time and thats when he mentioned about you and assured...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... can rely on you in this stranger city. Im writing this letter to you to get more ...
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Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...p to london, very excited, thrilled and cant wait to explore the city for fortnight....
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e churches, museum and river or bay view where i would go and relax. To explore m...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...es, museum and river or bay view where i would go and relax. To explore more, ca...
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Line 7, column 278, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...r shopping to buy souvenirs, chocolates and etc. Ill be eagerly waiting for your re...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to buy souvenirs, chocolates and etc. Ill be eagerly waiting for your reply. a...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...buy souvenirs, chocolates and etc. Ill be eagerly waiting for your reply. also...
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Suggestion: Also
... Ill be eagerly waiting for your reply. also would like to say, thank you in advance...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: also,
... Ill be eagerly waiting for your reply. also would like to say, thank you in advance...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63033175355 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36155958639 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63981042654 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.212387683 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.1333333333 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0666666667 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228542831501 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776159743997 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623868813006 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116447630297 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455849507721 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.