Write a letter to your manager about a computer system problem that you have encountered and say-
Describe the problem
How it is affecting your work
What needs to be done about it
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to draw your attention on the problem which I'm facing due to non-working of the workspace computer provide by you which is affecting my work, concentration & missing my project deadlines.
As you are aware that, I'm currently working on the next week shareholder presentation which requires an intensive use of computer. However, the pc isn't working properly and affecting my work. Annual meeting with shareholder's is crucial for company as we highlight internal insights of our growth and possible developments done by us to them.
Moreover, to fix this on-going computer issue i would like to suggest that we conduct quarterly computer health check-up, so as to mitigate sudden problems occuring due to non-maintaience. Additionally, we should also keep an extra laptop or pc in case if there is an emergency and the person can complete the task despite facing such issues.
Hence, I would like to request you that it would be great help if you can let admin team be aware about the issue and pressure them to fix it as early as possible.
Hoping to receive your prompt response on this matter!
Your's Faithfully,
Deepa
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-05-17 | Deepa Parekh | 89 | view |
| 2018-06-04 | Mohab | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...raw your attention on the problem which Im facing due to non-working of the worksp...
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Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fecting my work, concentration & missing my project deadlines. As you are awar...
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Line 5, column 24, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ct deadlines. As you are aware that, Im currently working on the next week shar...
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Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...ensive use of computer. However, the pc isnt working properly and affecting my work....
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Line 7, column 23, Rule ID: ON-GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...y us to them. Moreover, to fix this on-going computer issue i would like to suggest ...
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Line 7, column 47, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...er, to fix this on-going computer issue i would like to suggest that we conduct q...
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Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...uct quarterly computer health check-up, so as to mitigate sudden problems occuring due t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0152284264 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85512157575 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675126903553 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.1679978531 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 76.5299724578 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.625 16.8248392259 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191945009685 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712280460964 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567911729175 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939118979355 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479786741475 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 8.37731958763 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.