Write a letter to the friend asking advice for an employment opportunity in his country
Why you are looking in his country
describe qualification and skills
ask some questions about salary, benefit culture etc.
Dear Sam,
Hope this letter finds you in a good health.I completed my PhD.two weeks before and I am really glad to share this with you.I am looking for an employment opportunity in the field of research.I am writing this letter for an advice about the same.
I searched a lot about various universities and few companies that accept the field of my specialisation. I came to know that few top Australian universities accept the field of my research subjet . For example,as per their requirement,a candidate should be a research scholar with a first class degree throughout and an enthusiasm to learn something constantly.A person who can motivate and deal well with juniors and can support at all levels.I have all these qualities.
So I need a small favour from you.As a resident of Australia,I am sure you will be able to guide me .How is the work culture overall?Do they give salary as per your expectation and are there a promotions on regular basis? I would like to know about the benefits which I will get if I do overtime whenever need.
Your help in this will be a plus point.
Best Wishes,
Tanmay
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sam, Hope this letter finds you in a good hea...
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... this letter finds you in a good health.I completed my PhD.two weeks before and I...
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...I am really glad to share this with you.I am looking for an employment opportunit...
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...nt opportunity in the field of research.I am writing this letter for an advice ab...
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...nt opportunity in the field of research.I am writing this letter for an advice ab...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'advice'.
Suggestion: advice
...f research.I am writing this letter for an advice about the same. I searched a lot abou...
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... letter for an advice about the same. I searched a lot about various universiti...
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... accept the field of my specialisation. I came to know that few top Australian un...
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...s accept the field of my research subjet . For example,as per their requirement,a ...
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...ield of my research subjet . For example,as per their requirement,a candidate shoul...
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...t . For example,as per their requirement,a candidate should be a research scholar ...
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...nthusiasm to learn something constantly.A person who can motivate and deal well w...
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...h juniors and can support at all levels.I have all these qualities. So I need a...
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...es. So I need a small favour from you.As a resident of Australia,I am sure you w...
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...vour from you.As a resident of Australia,I am sure you will be able to guide me .H...
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...a,I am sure you will be able to guide me .How is the work culture overall?Do they ...
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...I am sure you will be able to guide me .How is the work culture overall?Do they giv...
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...ide me .How is the work culture overall?Do they give salary as per your expectatio...
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Suggestion: a promotion; promotions
...y as per your expectation and are there a promotions on regular basis? I would like to know ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...his will be a plus point. Best Wishes, Tanmay
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, really, so, thus, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70256410256 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79969114587 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.6707039738 44.8134815571 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 114.625 76.5299724578 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.375 16.8248392259 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 4.34317383033 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 2.54639175258 785% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147370800663 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460870619348 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603052138753 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772765165899 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749024914542 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.