Write a letter to HR department of a company requesting information about a interview that you attended but still waiting for results In your letter Describe the position applied for Why the interview went well Why do you need the results

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter regarding an interview I attended on 10th May in your company. It's been over a week and I am still awaiting the results. In addition, I applied for the position of a team Manager in the Information Technology department where I have to develop a new software along with managing the team.

Let me explain in detail my perspective of the interview. According, to me it went well as I was able to answer all the questions of the panel along with providing some useful insights on ongoing projects. Firstly, the idea of developing the software was well received by everyone. Secondly, I possess the specified experience in this domain and has copyright access to this particular technology. Lastly, there were discussions regarding my salary expectations and joining date hinting an interest in my profile.

While the company is a key player in the industry I have been getting offers from other organizations as well. Hence, would you please provide an update at your earliest, leaving me free to weigh my option. Moreover, if the result is provided by the end of today, it would be highly appreciated.

Thank you and looking forward to a positive reply.

Yours Faithfully,
Mary Smith

Votes
Average: 6.9 (6 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, look, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92857142857 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85063146921 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67619047619 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0213269334 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6153846154 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1538461538 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 4.34317383033 213% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191135054442 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555077468134 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542821042173 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111673911254 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820951518691 0.0580467560999 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 41.2886597938 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.