Dear Sir/ Madam,
I saw your article in my morning newspaper accidentally yesterday. Research wrote about my city – Hai Phong. Unfortunately, we have to apologize to your editorial office for verifying that this information in your journal was wrong in a certain part. That is the reason why we have to compose this suggestion immediately for that article in particular, and for your reputation in general.
As we said, we are residents of Hai Phong City. Through a long history, our civil feel confident to discuss our historical formation progress. Firstly, we confirmed that there was a huge incorrect knowledge in part 2, page 5, line 3 which implied that we had not risen up against the invader of French. Actually, at the time that French invaders had invaded our city, there were numerous documentaries that had verified our bravery against them. Moreover, if you do not mind, you could find various miserable stories in the center city museum.
We would really appreciate it if content writers in the editorial office consider our useful information. Your action seriously could bring our reputation on both sides back. Unless your journalist did rewrite this knowledge, we would apply the law to this critical problem sternly.
With our faithfully,
Hieu.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 207 350
No. of Characters: 1023 1500
No. of Different Words: 138 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.793 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.942 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.698 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 73 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 62 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 38 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.923 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.967 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.385 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.353 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.353 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.192 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5