We cannot deny the fact that advertising which plays a crucial role in the popularization of the product, is making a huge profit for those companies recently. Yet, the central question remains regarding whether these advertising forms help people to purchase the latest product which could improve their life quality or allure us to buy useless stuff. If I had to make a decision, personally, I would lean toward the latter viewpoint.
Promoting the product has become popular recently, as I said, the advertising form has made a huge profit for those companies. Therefore, they are making various forms of advertising through TVs, social media, etc. Meanwhile, people are seriously addicted to social platforms, namely Facebook or Instagram. While people were watching these promotions, they had tended to be curious about the information about the product, this is to say, they desired to know the function, the system, or the effectiveness of the product, so that they forgot about its realistic use in their own life. This is the reason why the rate of the buyer, who wasted their money purchasing needless stuff, has seen an upward trend in recent years.
Furthermore, some attractive promotions not only utilized the edition tools to the product but also told lies about the advantage in daily life. We do not concern about what we truly want, we just care about the creative content or humor vibes that they gave to us. This entertainment lures us away from the real valuation of or even that they mostly differ from the advertises.
In conclusion, we still consider the advantage that advertisement tells us about what improve our life quality. However, we have to accept the fact that we are wasting our money buying useless things as a result from advertisements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0406779661 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72090864725 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603389830508 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4157860128 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.384615385 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320229761425 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100311232088 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802791436746 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195057060419 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481364687089 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.