Dear Sir/ Madam,
I hope everything is great at your end. I was immensely happy when I came to know that your football team is going to hire a goalkeeper for the upcoming FIFA world cup 2023.
Let me explain myself in more detail. I am Jay Thomas, 23 year old football player. Since childhood, I was indulged in various sports activities as my father was a sports teacher in a high school. But after my high school, I realized that I have more inclination towards football game and me and my family thought that I should focus on pursuing it as a career. From that point, I have never looked back and involved myself in long hours of hard practice.
Fortunately, I was selected as a goal keeper immediately after I entered into college. There, we have played 3 inter college tournaments and have won all of them. Moreover, I grabbed the trophy of best goalkeeper twice. The job of any keeper is not only to save goals but also to play with mental status of opponents. In that case, my abilities to maintain my mental health during the whole game is a key factor. Also, I am best when its time of penalty shootout. These all makes me complete package as a player.
Currently, I have finished my University graduation and focusing on this upcoming world cup. I can join your team as early as possible. Please let me know in advance as I have to make some accommodation adjustments.
Thanking you in advance.
Yours faithfully,
Martin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'player' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'players'.
Suggestion: players
.... I am Jay Thomas, 23 year old football player. Since childhood, I was indulged in var...
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Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...us sports activities as my father was a sports teacher in a high school. But after my ...
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Line 4, column 194, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the best'.
Suggestion: of the best
...of them. Moreover, I grabbed the trophy of best goalkeeper twice. The job of any keeper...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 259.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56756756757 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6426420855 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 127.690721649 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1346358963 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.2631578947 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6315789474 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.73684210526 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101477859224 0.216113520407 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324286862895 0.0766984524023 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362816315762 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0734975568549 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477897876023 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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