Write a letter to a manager whose company is constructing their new office next to your apartment Introduce yourself Describe problems you are facing because of this Suggest solutions

Essay topics:

Write a letter to a manager whose company is constructing their new office next to your apartment
Introduce yourself
Describe problems you are facing because of this
Suggest solutions

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to complain about an under construction site in my vicinity.

My name is Mohit Ratnu, currently residing at 150ft ring road, where your new office site is running.

There are several problems of which I would like to give you brief information. The construction site is running till late night, Therefore, it is arduous to sleep because of intolerance noise of construction equipment. In addition to that, a large pile of debris is placed in the center of the street by your workers. Hence, we are unable to go to other side of the street and we have to take a long route to reach there.

I would like to recommend you few suggestions in order to resolve there issues. Firstly, fix the shift of workers and they should not be allowed to work after 9 o' clock at night. Secondly, either shift the debris situated in the street by using your workers or contact the debris collection service which will do this work on behalf of your company.

I hope, you will take some profound actions as early as possible and reply me at your earliest convenience.

Yours faithfully,
Mohit Ratnu

Votes
Average: 7.7 (5 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65284974093 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48126486837 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652849740933 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0805405358 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6363636364 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 4.34317383033 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148255301087 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522154929974 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325521846938 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788633073799 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220598477224 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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