Few men and women deem that few law-breakers should be allowed by states to do free work for the society and all offenders should not be kept in jail. I completely agree with the statement because it will give them a second chance to become a member of society as well as community will also be benefited from unpaid work offered by criminals.
To commence with, when perpetrators are kept in incarcerate, they feel that they are isolated from the society. Therefore, if a chance will be given to offenders to perform several tasks for the community, then it will make them more responsible because they could feel that a noble cause has been done by them for the betterment of society. Consequently, they could become a part of community. For example, in India, criminals are often doing work related to society such as, making different items for deprived class people. In this way, after completing prison terms, they are more likely to become a responsible member of society.
Another reason why criminals should be given free tasks for the society is that few of them are well-educated in different fields. Instead of spending time ideally in the prisons, it would be a better option to allocate work for every individual as per their education or experience. As a result, it will not only advantageous for the community, but law-breakers could also gain some experience which could be useful for them in future to get a job or work. To exemplify, in Great Britain, several tasks are given by prison authorities to perpetrators as per their capability and because of this maneuver, most of the criminals were able to find a suitable job, after being released from jails.
In conclusion, to give a second chance to become a part of society, community can be benefited by getting work-done without paying anything and offenders could search a suitable job for themselves after being released from prison, are major reasons to bolster the notion of unpaid work done by criminals for the society.
- Some people think that young people should choose their profession by themselves. Other believe that their parents choose for them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 73
- You are not satisfied with the changing room in a sports center that you visit.Write a letter to the manager,What the problem isHow you feel about the problemWhat steps you want the manager to take 78
- A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoid stress.What should people do to stay healthy in your country? 84
- Nowadays children mostly spend time playing computer games rather than sports What are the reasons for this Is it a positive or a negative development 87
- The cultures of many countries around the world becomes more similar than they used to be What are the reasons for this trend Is it positive or negative 85
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
...are isolated from the society. Therefore,if a chance will be given to offenders to ...
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Line 3, column 636, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...become a responsible member of society. Another reason why criminals should be g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, second, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90294117647 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73379940185 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488235294118 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.0589511625 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.916666667 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194719045296 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077367675419 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577504472506 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14266638007 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625985317501 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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