The claim that animals have rights has been subjected as a matter of debate since the 1970’s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned?
It is always a debatable issue that whether wild animals should be kept in confined space or not. Some argue that it cause detrimental implications on them, while others deem that it assist to conserve them. Zoos should not be prohibited which will elucidated in following paragraphs.
The primary reason to bolster the notion of keeping vermin in zoos is that nowadays numerous hunters around the globe are exploiting and killing animals for their personal benefits. As leather and skin of animals are expensive and valuable in international market, people kill animals and sell their skin and other organs for money. To exemplify, in India, elephants are killed for their tusk and leather. However, sometimes keeping animals in limited space could cause pernicious effects on their life as they are not used to it. therefore, animals will be safe in zoos.
On the other hand, freedom is one of the rudimentary rights of every living creature on the earth. If animals are kept in zoos then their freedom will be snatched. Although it is only for the betterment of animals, it is unacceptable up to some extent. For example, a leopard which is placed in zoo, could never run in its natural speed due to lack of space in zoos. Moreover, it is not the only way that salvation of animals can only be done if they are kept in zoos, there are other ways through which it can be fulfilled.
In conclusion, I reckon that animals should only be kept in zoos when they are in jeopardy or else authority should impose strict rules and regulation in order to conserve it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, for example, i reckon, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.5418719212 209% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76102941176 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52477987324 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533088235294 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 413.1 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1381445714 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249599773873 0.242375264174 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939148585289 0.0925447433944 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699327048599 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165905836499 0.151781067708 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171632697433 0.0609392437508 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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