You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make.
Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter:
• Introduce yourself.
• Explain that you did not buy the items listed.
• Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.
You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this to inform you about the incorrect credit statment which I received for the last month. The statment mentions numerous expensive purchases which are certainly not done by me.
My name is Mrinal Surve and I am a loyal customer of your renowned bank since 15 years. I received my credit card 5 years back and since, I have been using this card for various transactions especially for booking flights and accomodations for business trips.
However, while checking my last month's statment I noticed that certain hefty transactions listed were not done by me. I was on a business tour in Ireland for a week when these purchases were made and I am certain that I did not buy any of the products as I was out of town. The purchases were made in my hometown and I am certain that the credit card was with me because the statment lists the international transaction done by me.
I would kindly request you to check the statment again for error and clear them. Also, I can provide you proof of my transcations and tour if needed for your reference.
Thank you for consideration
Yours faithfully
Mrinal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e by me. My name is Mrinal Surve and I am a loyal customer of your renowned ba...
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...r of your renowned bank since 15 years. I received my credit card 5 years back an...
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... my credit card 5 years back and since, I have been using this card for various t...
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...ransactions listed were not done by me. I was on a business tour in Ireland for a...
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...at I did not buy any of the products as I was out of town. The purchases were mad...
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...id not buy any of the products as I was out of town. The purchases were made in my hometown...
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...t again for error and clear them. Also, I can provide you proof of my transcation...
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... Thank you for consideration Yours faithfully Mrinal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.705 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67850238006 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.8749237287 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188881560802 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839386900346 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411628620829 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1215367165 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348407836664 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.