Write a letter to your former teacher. In your letter
Explain how you heard about his/her retirement
Describe what made him/her such a great teacher
Say how your teacher affected your life.
Dear Mr. Suresh,
Hope this letter finds you with high spirits. Firstly, my hearty congratulations to you to complete 20 years of your great service as a teacher in our school. I am your student from the batch 2010 pass out as your son Kiran. Hope you remember me by now. As you know these days social media plays a vital role in spreading information rapidly around the globe. There were many photographs of your last working day in the Alumni group on Facebook. Therefore, got to know the news that you have got retired.
Firstly, I am glad and lucky to be your student for ten years right from my 1st standard. Not only me but others from my class also admires you and can never forget your classes and punishments which we all loved when we were in high schools. Although I hated Physics class until you started teaching our class which turned out to be one of my favorite classes in school. Moreover, you made the subject very interesting and also very easy to achieve the highest marks.
you have been just like a friend to me and also other students. I still remember my graduation day wherein every student had to talk about the teacher inspired them. Of course, I spoke about you which made you emotional and you hugged me in front of the whole school assembly. Henceforth, you being my role model in my life made me take up the same occupation as yours.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Bhavana
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r finds you with high spirits. Firstly, my hearty congratulations to you to comp...
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Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...son Kiran. Hope you remember me by now. As you know these days social media plays ...
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Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...all loved when we were in high schools. Although I hated Physics class until you started...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...y easy to achieve the highest marks. you have been just like a friend to me and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, moreover, so, still, therefore, of course, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 259.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64864864865 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35853933001 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610038610039 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1139957478 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8235294118 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2352941176 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222310212182 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796018508153 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631279354103 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118990414807 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712528258198 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.