Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your flat.Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter▪explain the reason for the noise▪apologise▪describe what action you will take. Write at least 150 words. You do

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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your flat.Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
▪explain the reason for the noise
▪apologise
▪describe what action you will take. Write at least 150 words. You do NO

Dear Mr Kevin,

I am writing to apologize regarding the disturbance caused to you from my flat.

Unfortunately, I was busy the last weekend with some household work so couldn't reply to your letter. My family and I are living in the same flat from past ten years and got really bored of the interior of the house. My mom the most creative person among us suggested to get the entire home renovated and also the wooden work to be changed for the cupboards.Therefore, the noise comes from the drilling machine.

I am extremely sorry to bother you. However, I'd have informed you regarding the renovation of the flat and given you a prior notice about the disturbance that would be caused.

There is a good news for you that the drilling work was finished yesterday, Except for the painting of the walls is remaining. However, I would personally take care and try my level best to get the painting work silently done.

I appreciate your patience and kind cooperation.

Yours Sincerely,
Bhavana

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ast weekend with some household work so couldnt reply to your letter. My family and I a...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: BORED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
...flat from past ten years and got really bored of the interior of the house. My mom the m...
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Line 5, column 258, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggested getting'.
Suggestion: suggested getting
...y mom the most creative person among us suggested to get the entire home renovated and also the ...
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Line 5, column 358, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...en work to be changed for the cupboards.Therefore, the noise comes from the drilling mach...
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Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...extremely sorry to bother you. However, Id have informed you regarding the renovat...
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Line 9, column 10, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good news'.
Suggestion: good news
...ance that would be caused. There is a good news for you that the drilling work was fini...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, really, regarding, so, therefore, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86705202312 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82588617322 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630057803468 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7238134797 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25959855209 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100825958017 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049043210881 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129600204941 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334789718605 0.0580467560999 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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