Hi Thien,
How are you? I wish you are always happy. I has received your messages that you want to visit my home town. I'm so really fun when I hear that. I think you will a great tour. If you want to have a good weather to visit my home town, i suggest you can go from January to March. This is the suitable time to travel. The weather is not so hot and not too cold. It's so fresh. I don't know exactly the day you will be in my home town. I think it is better is three days. In three days you can go to the Da Dia Reef. The view is so beautiful. This is the Reef. It has the beach. You can sightseeing and take a photo. I think you are not dispointed. The next, you can go to the Vung Ro port. In this place you can swimming to coral diving, go to the beach and eat every specialties location such as: lobster, King crab, many fishs that is so fresh ect. In the evening you return your restaurant in Tuy Hoa city. I can go walk to eat some street food of my home town such as: Tuna eyes, fish soup, Banh beo, grilled meat skewers,ect. After you go to ẹnoy a cup of coffee by the beach. Having so many coffee shop by the beach. The coffee is so good and the view is so beautiful.The last place you can go Hai Dang lighthouse in my home town. This is a place received the first light of new day in our country: Easternmost of Vietnam. This is amazing. These are three places which i think you must try to visit in my home town. About the accommondation that you can choose. If you like the peace in fishing village you can choose homestay from far center of city. It is so full facilities. You don't worry about anything. But if you like the bustle of the city you can choose live in hotel in the center of the city. It's not expensive. About 300 thousands Vietnam Dong to 1 million Vietnam Dong. You can check before. And you can ask them the price their hotel comfortably.
Above, some experiences that I can share to you. Hope to you have a good trip.
Gao
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...are you? I wish you are always happy. I has received your messages that you want to...
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Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...es that you want to visit my home town. Im so really fun when I hear that. I think...
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Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e a good weather to visit my home town, i suggest you can go from January to Marc...
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Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...o hot and not too cold. Its so fresh. I dont know exactly the day you will be in my ...
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Line 3, column 580, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'sightsee'
Suggestion: sightsee
... is the Reef. It has the beach. You can sightseeing and take a photo. I think you are not d...
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Line 3, column 706, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'swim'
Suggestion: swim
...the Vung Ro port. In this place you can swimming to coral diving, go to the beach and ea...
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Line 3, column 762, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'specialties'' or 'specialty's'?
Suggestion: specialties'; specialty's
...l diving, go to the beach and eat every specialties location such as: lobster, King crab, m...
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Line 3, column 1019, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ect
...ish soup, Banh beo, grilled meat skewers,ect. After you go to ẹnoy a cup of coffee b...
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Line 3, column 1025, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...up, Banh beo, grilled meat skewers,ect. After you go to ẹnoy a cup of coffee by the b...
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Line 3, column 1086, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun coffee seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much coffee', 'a good deal of coffee'.
Suggestion: much coffee; a good deal of coffee
...a cup of coffee by the beach. Having so many coffee shop by the beach. The coffee is so goo...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...is so good and the view is so beautiful.The last place you can go Hai Dang lighthou...
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Line 3, column 1369, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s amazing. These are three places which i think you must try to visit in my home ...
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Line 3, column 1462, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the accommondation that you can choose. If you like the peace in fishing village y...
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Line 3, column 1582, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... of city. It is so full facilities. You dont worry about anything. But if you like t...
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Line 3, column 1663, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to live'
Suggestion: to live
...e the bustle of the city you can choose live in hotel in the center of the city. Its...
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Line 3, column 1847, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d you can ask them the price their hotel comfortably. Above, some experiences th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.48453608247 227% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 4.92783505155 325% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 64.0 32.9175257732 194% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 26.3917525773 167% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 937.175257732 168% => OK
No of words: 392.0 206.0 190% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.01275510204 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 3.78020617076 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17531150976 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 127.690721649 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479591836735 0.622605031667 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 290.88556701 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.13402061856 230% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 38.0 12.6804123711 300% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0236736205 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 41.3947368421 76.5299724578 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.3157894737 16.8248392259 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.15789473684 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 7.41237113402 229% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 21.0 3.94845360825 532% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0924328516567 0.216113520407 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0267956771179 0.0766984524023 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490592924289 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746346179889 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163544953149 0.0580467560999 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 2.6 8.37731958763 31% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 95.17 70.7449484536 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 2.5 7.45979381443 34% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.5 8.71597938144 52% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.9 7.59969072165 78% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 8.62886597938 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 3.0 8.15463917526 37% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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