Dear Bap,
Hope this letter find you and your family in the best of heath and sprit. In this week, I have so many projects that he do not have any free time. Today is a sunday so I have a free time to write to you a thank for your invitation to visit your new house in last week. I love it because so many reason:
The first, your new house is really beautiful and I like it so much. I love the decoration of the house and It is very modern with two mail color: black and white. It is simple but warm too. I think you put a lot of effort into design your house. And It is so beautiful.
The second, I love your reception for me. The food is so good and coffee is too. In the party, I can not forget the conversation of us. I smile so much that my jaw hurts. After the long time I had worked so much I lost interest in everything. When I see you in the party, I am so fun and decrease my stress.
I hope we could see together regularly and I think the meeting is so great. I give you the invitation to my home in next weekend. I hope you and your family have a free time and set up the meeting. I really looking forward to you.
Warms
Gao
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ave so many projects that he do not have any free time. Today is a sunday so I ha...
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Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...he do not have any free time. Today is a sunday so I have a free time to write to you a...
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Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...y so I have a free time to write to you a thank for your invitation to visit your new h...
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Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
...ouse in last week. I love it because so many reason: The first, your new house is really b...
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Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... us. I smile so much that my jaw hurts. After the long time I had worked so much I lo...
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Line 6, column 130, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... invitation to my home in next weekend. I hope you and your family have a free ti...
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Line 6, column 198, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ave a free time and set up the meeting. I really looking forward to you. Warms...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, really, second, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 3.84810126582 4.54256449028 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08732432981 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510548523207 0.622605031667 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4706195452 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 50.6666666667 76.5299724578 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1666666667 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72222222222 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260740026673 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780832611594 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873490961184 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17655428984 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582871562995 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.3 8.37731958763 39% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 92.12 70.7449484536 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.6 7.45979381443 48% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.16 8.71597938144 48% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.88 7.59969072165 77% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 8.15463917526 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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