Hi Bap,
Hope you are doing well. Last week I received a invitation to come the music show of Den Vau. As you know I really love him. I am always expect to have a opportunity to see him, listen to his music dicrectly. Last week I translated to a company which they were missing the interpreter for their semior. So they felt to thank for my help that they gave me two tickets to go to the Den vau's show. I feel so happy. I never belive that I have this chance. Immediately I thought about you. I knew that you always like him too. I think that we will have fun times together. In this show we will listen to music, see many people who like him like our. We can make to new friends who have the same hobby. In addition, we can sing with him and so many people. We can decrease our stress when we work so much during a week. Further more, I want to you know when we hear music directly is so amazing. It is not the same like in the TV or youtube, ect. The sound is so great and we see him reality.
I would recomend you go to with me. You will not never disappointed. I promise to you! This show will taken on Saturday 28 August 2021 at Quan Khu 7 stadium. Hope you have free time and go to me.
Your sincerely friend
Gao
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ou are doing well. Last week I received a invitation to come the music show of De...
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Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tion to come the music show of Den Vau. As you know I really love him. I am always...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'expected'.
Suggestion: expected
...you know I really love him. I am always expect to have a opportunity to see him, liste...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ly love him. I am always expect to have a opportunity to see him, listen to his m...
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Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'will' requires base form of the verb: 'disappoint'
Suggestion: disappoint
...d you go to with me. You will not never disappointed. I promise to you! This show will taken...
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Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'take' or 'be taken'?
Suggestion: take; be taken
...inted. I promise to you! This show will taken on Saturday 28 August 2021 at Quan Khu ...
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Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'stadium' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'stadia', 'stadiums'.
Suggestion: stadia; stadiums
...n Saturday 28 August 2021 at Quan Khu 7 stadium. Hope you have free time and go to me. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, so, well, i feel, i think, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 56.0 32.9175257732 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 3.98380566802 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13576471728 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 12.6804123711 181% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.3682870299 44.8134815571 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 42.7826086957 76.5299724578 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.7391304348 16.8248392259 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4347826087 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 7.41237113402 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170514856993 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573617529956 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631338520026 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199270796626 0.12726935374 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11217127015 0.0580467560999 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 2.7 8.37731958763 32% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 95.17 70.7449484536 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 2.5 7.45979381443 34% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.62 8.71597938144 53% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.92 7.59969072165 78% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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