write a letter to your new neighbour because you have some problem about his car parking in your letter welcome him her as a neighbour explain your problem give some suggestions

Essay topics:

write a letter to your new neighbour because you have some problem about his car parking

in your letter

-welcome him her as a neighbour

-explain your problem

-give some suggestions

dear Mr Anderson,

Hello, my name is Anna George, living in flat number 102, exactly opposite to your flat 101. Firstly, I would like to welcome you as my new neighbour. I am confident that we will share a happy and confident neighbourhood.

I am inscribing to draw your attention towards your car parking ethics. I think you might not have gone through the guidebook, given to every new member of society. Well, I would like to inform that you park the car very near to the entry gate of my apartment it might be convenient to you but because of this, I have been parking my car on the road since last 3 days. Let me also tell you that someone broke the side view mirror of my car yesterday.

It would be really convenient if you could please park your car at the right corner of the compound that is the right place for the car parking provided by management. I hope you understand my problem and will follow the society guidelines.

I look forward to having your cooperation.

Best regards,

Anna George.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Dear
dear Mr Anderson, Hello, my name is Anna ...
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Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ention towards your car parking ethics. I think you might not have gone through t...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, really, so, well, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51351351351 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51154238317 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1187020734 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9090909091 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272165102502 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100884646309 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705116746654 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169720105255 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303477360859 0.0580467560999 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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