Some people believe that computer games are extremely beneficial for students and children. Do you agree or disagree?
Gone are the days when children used to play outdoor games However, in modern epoch, this trend has undergone a sea change due to the advent of technology. A section of society considers it a positive turn while others are more concerned about it's repercussions. This essay accords with the notion that this practice is certainly beneficial for pupils as well as learners for several reasons, elucidated in the upcoming segments.
First and foremost benefit of computer games among impressionistic minds is that it increases the span of concentration and focus. Consequently, it improves their academic performance. To be more precise, playing puzzle game requires a lot of attention. Hence, children develop positive attitude towards their tasks whether these are physically or mentally. Moreover, tender minds can ameliorate their cognitive, analytical, reasoning and problem solving skills; which are part and parcel to be impeccable at academic and vocational level.
Likewise, indulging in electronic games teach children the most pertinent philosophy of life that how to defeat gracefully. They also learn how to make persistent and consistent efforts. The feeling of competition is developed among them; that is the major key to become successful in every Walk of life. Not only this but also it boosts the confidence level since they are more susceptible to become active and agile in the games like vice City, pub g and so on.
However, the main loophole of playing electronic game is that it distracts their academic performance as they start spending long hours in front of screen and show less interest in studies. Apart from it, their physical level gets affected. To illustrate, it forces them to lead a sedentary lifestyle which becomes the reason of obesity, weak eye sight and health also get deteriorated.
To recapitulate, I vehemently vouch that merits of computer games for children are far more than that of demerits in terms of confidence, intelligence as it widens their perspective and broadens their horizon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, well, while, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28615384615 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89870650606 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633846153846 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3709623638 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.375 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129332999554 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375884319398 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403962496682 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0734791918368 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371112713574 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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