you are facing a problem with your neighbour who is leaving rubbish near your house. write a letter to your neighbour.in your letter -introduce yourself -explain the problem -provide an appropriate solution

Essay topics:

you are facing a problem with your neighbour who is leaving rubbish near your house. write a letter to your neighbour.

in your letter

-introduce yourself

-explain the problem

-provide an appropriate solution

Dear Mr. Anderson,

I am Anna George, living in bungalow number 141, exactly opposite to your Bungalow. I am in inscribing to draw your immediate attention to the problem of litter near my house.

I have been observing that someone from your home, might be your maid, is leaving litter near the main gate of my house. Because of this, a foul order is created which not only brings about an unpleasant and and healthy feeling but also negative vibes. On the top of it, the waste also attracts all sorts of insects which are precarious to me and my family member. Yesterday, I had to pay fiine of $22 to the local council for the removal of the litter left by you.

I would appreciate it if you could please intimate the same with your new maid to use common dustbin of our society. Also you can call the local councils helpline number to get your rubbish collected and the number is 123456789. I am bit perturbed with the problem and I plead you to look into it and take promp action.

I look forward to hearing from you.

your sincerely

Anna George.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... the problem of litter near my house. I have been observing that someone from y...
^
Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...ich not only brings about an unpleasant and and healthy feeling but also negative vibes...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...d to use common dustbin of our society. Also you can call the local councils helplin...
^^^^
Line 7, column 147, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'councils'' or 'council's'?
Suggestion: councils'; council's
...ur society. Also you can call the local councils helpline number to get your rubbish col...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 236, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
...ected and the number is 123456789. I am bit perturbed with the problem and I plead ...
^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Your
... I look forward to hearing from you. your sincerely Anna George.
^^^^
Line 11, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to hearing from you. your sincerely Anna George.
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46907216495 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31927260175 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639175257732 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3690377431 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8181818182 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287563360151 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105649485276 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788548293382 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148466850154 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711231350361 0.0580467560999 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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