Parents should take courses in parenting in order to improve the lives of their children.
To what extent do you agree?
Parenting, these days, is becoming a major concern among parents. While some believe enrolling in professional training for it could be beneficial, others teach their children based on own’s experiences. In my opinion, parents should engage in some classes which could help them to improve the way they impart knowledge, but it is not the only way to enhance children’s skills in long term, and this essay will discuss both views.
Certainly, taking any sort of assistance for teaching own wards can be helpful for both. We followed the trivial ways, which need to be changed, to teach children for today’s highly competitive markets. In India, for example, some eminent schools evaluate parents soft skills before accepting the application, and if they are unable to set the bar, they need to be trained by the courses designed specifically for them. So, It seems inevitable for them to not to take such courses.
However, many parents do not need to take them as they might already aware about the basic rulebook needed for children in order to enhance their offspring’s life. By teaching children using from their experience could give them much more real-life facts, and they can learn from it that can be advantageous although they should know when to use such instance in their life. Therefore, it is not essential to admit to any trainings like this.
In conclusion, conventional methods for training your child could be useful only to provide basic principles that cannot withstand too long. In order to enhance the lives for children which could be essential.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, sort of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07662835249 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63032331191 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609195402299 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2727596478 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.416666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18435671219 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678815009486 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635880606279 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113947504758 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433162649282 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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