Dear Mr. Paul,
I am writing to request for my son David to be absent from school on Friday to enable him attend my brother's wedding which will take place in Las Vegas next Saturday.
My brother will be getting married to his girl-friend after a six-year relationship. The couple have asked David to join their bridal train as a page-boy. The wedding will be taking place in Las Vegas, which is a six-hour flight away from Virginia. To ensure we arrive on time for the events scheduled for the wedding, I have decided that our family will travel on Friday. Consequently, we are request for your permission for David to be away from school for one day.
Realizing that his second term examinations are coming up soon, I have discussed with Mr. Roberts, David's teacher, to plan an extra hour of lessons for him next week. This will help him catch-up what he could have missed due to his one-day absence from school.
I look forward to your kind approval with respect to my request.
Yours faithfully,
Mike
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, look, second, so, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72625698324 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43068767311 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648044692737 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9560896876 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277884499665 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110223057357 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702184611074 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146638594523 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656640200949 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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