Dear Tony,
How have you been since the last time we spoke on phone two days ago? I am writing to share this exciting news with you. I won the photography competition that was done at my office to mark the World Environment Day. Although it was a highly competitive contest across the company and I felt I stood no chance to win, I was extremely elated when I got an email that my photograph was selected as the best of the lot.
Here is how I won the competition. While scouting for great places to take a photographs related to conserving the environment, I took a trip to the Lekki Conservation Park. After I'd spent about three hours taking random pictures, I suddenly spotted a squirrel on a large leaf lying by the edge of a pond. Immediately, I took a picture with my camera. Surprisingly, the photograph came out so beautifully especially because it portrayed a relationship among animals, plants and water.
I have been informed that an exhibition will hold on 30th September, 2019 where the three best pictures will be showcased. Consequently, I am inviting you to the exhibition which will also include the presentation of the first price to me, having won the photography competition.
Hope to see you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Luke
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a photograph' or simply 'photographs'?
Suggestion: a photograph; photographs
...While scouting for great places to take a photographs related to conserving the environment, ...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...p to the Lekki Conservation Park. After Id spent about three hours taking random p...
^^
Line 7, column 59, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'September 2019'.
Suggestion: September 2019
...ed that an exhibition will hold on 30th September, 2019 where the three best pictures will be s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78440366972 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96297964552 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665137614679 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7520500278 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2307692308 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215924398014 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713492711679 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551594725569 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105296423131 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407051204457 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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