Dear Max,
I was supposed to leave for Canada on the 4th of February 2022 but an important event came up which I will have to attend.
My younger sister’s long time boyfriend is planning a surprise engagement party for her on the 1st of February 2022. Since the both of them started dating, I’ve always been there for them in terms of relationship advice. My attendance is mandatory because you know I’m her only brother.
About the disappointment this has caused please accept my apologies. It’s not my fault that I couldn’t keep to my words or that I disappointed you. I’d make it up to you once I come over to see you for friendship sake.
My one year study leave starts on 1st March 2022 and I’ll be able to see you before I head to my school in Mexico which resumes on 10th March 2022. During the summer is also a good time to visit; schools won’t be in session then.
Can’t wait to see you.
Adam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Max, I was supposed to leave for Canada on th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58479532164 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44345092992 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672514619883 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.228397636 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151940640871 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609733258734 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567751992279 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952782652273 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632963449717 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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