You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
write a letter to the landlord. In your letter
-introduce yourself
-explain what is wrong with the furniture
-say what action you would like the landlord to take.
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">Dear John,
I am Charles your new tenant. Recently I moved to your rented accommodation along with my family, after finishing all formalities duly. However we have noticed that furniture in the house is in quite dilapidated condition. As per our rental agreement the property should have brand new furnitures with all modern and advanced equipment. Termites infested </span><span style="font-size: 19.36px;">existing</span><span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> wooden racks, cots, tables and chairs and became ineligible for domestic purposes. my mother received severe injuries last while sleeping on cot which is semi broken.
I ask you to take immediate action by replacing all old furnitures with new and branded ones. Kindly take a visit to the house premises for making estimation and other repair works in the house. I also recommend you to take help from experts for taking right decision. I would n't mind to take necessary legal action </span><span style="font-size: 19.36px;">against</span><span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> you and your agent if </span>i<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> don't receive any proper reply from you. </span>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pos;font-size: 19.36px;'>Dear John, I am Charles your new tenant. Recently I...
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Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
..., after finishing all formalities duly. However we have noticed that furniture in the h...
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Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'branded'.
Suggestion: branded
...ntal agreement the property should have brand new furnitures with all modern and adva...
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Line 5, column 551, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...ecame ineligible for domestic purposes. my mother received severe injuries last wh...
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Line 7, column 502, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... style='font-size: 19.36px;'> dont receive any proper reply from you.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.39053254438 4.54256449028 141% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.33978345534 2.54303337028 210% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.715976331361 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6899505592 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0806127361654 0.216113520407 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444003305599 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04907982718 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0519452022339 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367684247311 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 8.37731958763 204% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 70.7449484536 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.49 8.71597938144 224% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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