You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter
• introduce yourself
• explain what is wrong with the furniture
• say what action you would like the landlord to take
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear William,
I am Thomson your new tenant. I recently joined in your house which ishouse " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"> in East end corner of the City along with my family. However, within few days we noticed that existing furniture in the house are quiet quiet " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">old fashioned and damaged. As per our rental agreement the house should be ready with new and branded furniture by the time we join the house . To my surprise I found the existing wooden tables, cots, chairs and racks are infested with termites and quiet ineligible for domestic purpose.
I hope this is just a mistake and you will rectify this with immediate notice of the problem. I suggest you to visit the house premises and take estimation of costs for arranging new furniture and other repairs. it would be better if you take help from an expert before proceeding further. I would also like to bring your notice about remedial clause in our agreement where it it " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">is made clear that if you fail to give proper and necessary response to this letter I can sue you for damages and charges for arranging another accommodation of my choice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 334, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: quiet
...hat existing furniture in the house are quiet quiet ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
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Line 7, column 616, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... furniture by the time we join the house . To my surprise I found the existing woo...
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Line 9, column 213, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...anging new furniture and other repairs. it would be better if you take help from a...
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Line 9, column 375, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: it
... remedial clause in our agreement where it it ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45175438596 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41517102743 2.54303337028 134% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587719298246 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.821930791 44.8134815571 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 138.111111111 76.5299724578 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 16.8248392259 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12620564741 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628458448551 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331775291684 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112676673337 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436397757638 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 8.37731958763 202% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 8.71597938144 168% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.