You and your family are living in a rented accommodation in an English-speaking country.
You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter
Introduce yourself
Explain what is wrong with the furniture
Say what action you would like the landlord to take
Dear Mr. Johnson,
I am writing to you in connection with the house I am renting from you in the Georgetown, Sydney. This letter is to bring your attention to the quality of furniture in here and why it’s dangerous to our safety if no action is taken.
My name is Mary and I am a software designer working in one of the fastest growing start-ups in this city. I live with my husband and two children, who go to the school down the road. As my husband's office is in the tech district, it is very convenient to stay in your accommodation.
Unfortunately, some of the furniture is quite old and not in the best condition. The dining table is the worse of the lot and it's getting very scary to use the chairs that are available with it. The other day my son was having lunch at the table when one of the legs snapped into half and he fell down. Luckily, he wasn’t injured, but the others in the set are also wobbly.
I would like you to please replace the furniture at the earliest or let us know if we can change them ourselves and deduct their cost from the next month’s rent.
Looking forward to your positive revert
Yours Sincerely
Karishma Dave
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Mr. Johnson, I am writing to you in connection with t...
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...nvenient to stay in your accommodation. Unfortunately, some of the furniture is ...
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...your accommodation. Unfortunately, some of the furniture is quite old and not in the b...
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...ll down. Luckily, he wasn’t injured, but the others in the set are also wobbly. ...
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... the others in the set are also wobbly. I would like you to please replace the ...
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... their cost from the next month’s rent. Looking forward to your positive revert...
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... Looking forward to your positive revert Yours Sincerely Karishma Dave
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...our positive revert Yours Sincerely Karishma Dave
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... Yours Sincerely Karishma Dave
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41474654378 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45539537046 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640552995392 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6126174015 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.0909090909 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217734924325 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068446282429 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552382059629 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105224438432 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731823620874 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.