You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter:
Explain why you have moved
Describe the new house
Invite your friend to come and visit.
Dear Emily,
How are you?
It’s been a long time since we saw each other last, and I hope you’re doing fine in this time span. By the way, I shifted to a new home and thought to update you on the same. As you know, I was unhappy with my current job and was looking for a job with a higher pay package; fortunately, I’ve got a chance to work in a multinational company which is offering me a decent remuneration. Since my new job is in another city, I had to move to a new home in this city.
I’m excited to tell you that this apartment has three bedrooms, a hall and a kitchen and is more spacious than my previous home. As it is newly built, infrastructure is completely modern. There is a private garden in the backyard where I like to sit and relax after a long working day at work.
I think you must come here to spend a weekend at my new flat. We can sit together and cherish the old memories of our college days.
I’m eagerly waiting to hear from you soon.
Best wishes,
Ruchi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, i think, you know, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23195876289 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39577625463 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649484536082 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6797382128 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.4166666667 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123069973416 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459460742946 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039445116434 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0670673567186 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251416591029 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.