You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel.Task: Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. 1. Let them know when you will be arriving and leaving.2. What type of rooms you would like.3. Ask them how much the weekend

Dear Sir,

My name is Jignesh. I will a guest at your reputation hotel along with my wife on this coming weekend. I am writing to let you know about my requirement as well as inquire about the charges.

The first thing I would like you to know is I will do the check-in on 28 October and check-out on 30 October 2017. Accordingly, it would be great if you could provide me the sea facing room on the ground floor to avail the morning beach view as well as walk. In addition, please include the breakfast as well as dinner facility in the package. However, lunch service will be avail from outside the hotel during the site visit.

Furthermore, I would like to know about the places near to the hotel which really meant for tourist to visit. It would be great if you could include the details of historical places on your list.

Considering the all above requirement, please let us know the overall cost of the two persons.

I would like to thank you in advance for this information.

Yours faithfully,

Harish Sharma

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, furthermore, however, if, really, so, well, in addition, you know, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58064516129 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45123558689 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2801731978 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 4.34317383033 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302866978875 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962183114654 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579734740823 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151667561743 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551072507754 0.0580467560999 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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