Nowadays all over the world, people are very busy with their profession and day-to-day activities. Is it effective to present the stories over the newspaper and TV with pictures? Several people might discord with this claim, however, I absolutely concur with this perspective and will provide the evidence and justifications in this essay to validate my bird's eye view.
To embark upon, In the today's life, is it easy to spare a time to watch TV and read newspapers? Obviously not. Then pictorial presentation is significantly fine to capture the whole stories or news in a few seconds for an effective time from the hectic busy schedule. For instance, famous Microsoft company has already had an excel and work software. But still, the company had launched the powerpoint for easy demonstration of complete story or data thought pictorial presentation. Similarly, upon realization of the reader mind and situation, media agencies are favoring the stories must be accompanied by the pictures over the media platform.
Furthermore, whatever the platform, space constraint becomes a major challenge. The same concept is applicable to a newspaper as well a TV media. Consequently, the world is heading toward for proper utilization of space through different ways. Definitely, the pictorial way of presentation is best among them all. For instance, according to the famous newspaper of India Dainik News Analysis, there is a huge saving in space and paper after the introducing of pictures along with the stories and most of the readers really appreciated this innovative idea.
In my opinion, definitely, time, as well as space saving, is best innovative idea. Furthermore, it is also a fact that pictures can be easily impressed over the human mind which cannot be easily forgettable. Moreover, easy to understand as compared to just reading only.
In nutshell, it is crystal clear that pictures along with the stories are the best way to demonstrate the stories over the newspaper and TV.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, second, similarly, so, still, then, well, for instance, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22049689441 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94898466447 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55900621118 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4010236918 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8823529412 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9411764706 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.82352941176 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202069860956 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059730679974 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640292446812 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115073592296 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476774259624 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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