Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. While other think it is a waste of money. Whats your opinion.
Rising adoption of modern day apparel among the elite class society has significantly contributed to the popularity of these clothes among the masses. Fashionable clothes are now an integral part of daily wear across the planet and have gained acceptance in current society. Due to the booming economy, many common people now have deep pockets and feel proud to wear these outfits. However, being an extravagance on clothes is considered a waste of resources by some section of community. Subsequent sections will provide my view point with supporting examples.
Increased income among the working class society with more buying power significantly contributed for urge to be more fashionable. Moreover, with fierce competition among the big retailers like Under Armor, Raulf Lauren and so forth significantly reduced the price points and indirectly created a plethora of buyers. For example, premium women party wear from Banana is now priced around $25 as compared to $125 last season. Sound economic condition of the masses indirectly led to wider acceptance of fashion.
Urbanites are now habitual spender of money on clothes and not saving enough for future uncertainties. Recent survey conducted by James Mc advertising agency found that approximately 40% of monthly income is now spent on clothes by people in the age group of 25 to 45. Like any other commodity, fashionable clothes are perishable and money not wisely spent could invite challenges during uncertain time.
In conclusion, wearing branded clothes tends to be a modern day trend. Rising incomes and competitive prices helped many to realize the dream of being fashionable. However, being extravagant in these outfits can be a warning bell in this dynamically changing world. Let's prioritize our needs and plan accordingly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 267, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37943262411 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86640881277 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645390070922 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9780623213 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8125 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203348047479 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604851821498 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541980867911 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114620282241 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607809527354 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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