Recently published figures show that the wildlife population around the world has decreased by around fifty per cent over the last fifty years. What can we do to help protect the wildlife round the world?
The effect of deforestation which was always debatable has now become an unprecedented controversy form many years. Consequently, the destruction has sparked the numbers in the extinction of animals worldwide which is becoming a bare reality for humans. Timely measures taken will not only save the creatures but will enhance the overall beauty of the earth’s green life. This essay will delineate the effective measures to save the species before deducing a logical conclusion.
At the very outset, the government must introduce the inevitable laws which once broken, should have concrete penalization on the person at fault. To explain this, the major impact is related with the illegal animal hunting which has led to the provocation and indulgence of more people as the way of daily activity. Moreover, it has now become a fashion to hunt animals to showcase the social status and wear the clothes made of animal skin. Stopping this will give the animals a peace as well as an independence to live, hence creating or making the wildlife more beautiful.
On the other hand, pollution as well as demolishing the trees are also the root causes for the disturbance in wildlife. For example, there has been a survey conducted worldwide to know the activities related with activities which are enhancing the impacts. Most of the people took the side in the responses where they have agreed on irresponsible behavior from the humans which is creating the spike. To illustrate this, picnic areas, travelling spots or the events where people tend to throw objects in the water is affecting the marine animals which is also passing over to the wild animals. Also, making objects from the trees are also included in decreasing the population in jungles. Large organizations or the companies should come up with the measures where they are making things from recyclables and not from the forests which ought to make a difference.
To conclude, deforestation diminishes the Greenland of earth which is leading to global warming and must be stopped by governments or the organizations. It is the foremost responsibility on humans whether to create a balanced atmosphere on earth where animals enrich or create the forests and jungles. And, Humans to maintain it for wealthy lifespan.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'from'?
Suggestion: from
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, moreover, so, well, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15322580645 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82104284786 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545698924731 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1682428452 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.764705882 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8823529412 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0197271590073 0.244688304435 8% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00690562625071 0.084324248473 8% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0161411142112 0.0667982634062 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0101378056017 0.151304729494 7% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0101703399767 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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