You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.
Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter:
Give details of the job.
Explain Why it is important to you.
Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference.
Dear Mr john
I am writing this letter to ask a letter of reference from you to apply for a position of sales manager in an exporting company.
Thehe new office is located in the downtown area which is very close to where I live. The duty of this sales management position is challenging for me. It include attending various exhibition overseas at the sake of finding potential customers. Maintain a healthy relationship with existing customers and coördinate with factory to produce smoothly.
I am really passionate about this opportunity since it fit right in to my career interest. As you know, on of the vital factor I choose International Business as my major in college is to working in the exporting industry one day. I can functionally apply my outgoing personality to interact with different foreign customers. Thus, my goal will be fulfilled If I can get this Job.
If you could grant me this favour, would you input some informations in the letter with regard to all the volunteer works I take part in the university? I believe the human resource department emphasis on the social skills than academic back ground.
I look forward to hearing from you
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| 2019-11-05 | guojunliang | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to apply for a position of sales manager in an exporting company. Thehe new...
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Line 9, column 156, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'includes'?
Suggestion: includes
...ment position is challenging for me. It include attending various exhibition overseas a...
^^^^^^^
Line 21, column 35, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I look forward to hearing from you
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, thus, you know, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9552238806 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85401339184 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65671641791 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5139896163 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162142790241 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048902527922 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657320777127 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987321654066 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716495579545 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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