You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference Write a letter to a former teacher In your letter give details of the job explain why it is important to you suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference

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You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.
Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter:

give details of the job
explain why it is important to you
suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference

Dear Mr Nam,

This is John Smith, I was your Graduate Research Assistant for the Batch of 2009 at the University of Missouri. Hope you and your family are doing great. I am writing with regards to a reference letter I need for a job I am applying to.

The position is with Tesla and the role is that of a Senior Design Engineer Mechanical. They are looking for someone who has experience in the design of composite materials and their testing.

As you are aware that Tesla is one of the leading companies in our field of work. Getting a chance to work there would be an incredible opportunity to advance my career and work on some innovative technologies.

Since my research at the university was related to composite materials and testing their properties and strengths, I would greatly appreciate if you can add my project abstract details to the reference letter. It will greatly bolster my chances of obtaining an interview and hopefully the job.

Thank you for your mentorship and guidance and please let me know if you have any questions.

Yours sincerely,
John Doe

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...posite materials and their testing. As you are aware that Tesla is one of the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84042553191 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73039743764 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627659574468 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.136341245 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7272727273 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26440670754 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910457737888 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831934228982 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128456083785 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10342613747 0.0580467560999 178% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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