You are attending a part time course in a college. Due to some problem, you cannot continue your course. Write a letter to your teacher
- Describe the course
- Explain the problem
- Explain the reason for not continuing
- Tell the teacher about your future plans
Dear sir,
I am writing to bring your attention that I cannot continue part time course ' Webservices Automation' which I am doing in the evening batch in your institute 'Jersey College'.
The reason for discontinuing in the mid of the training is due to heavy workload I have been assigned to and I couldn't complete in my office hours resulting to do overtime to complete the given tasks. Moreover, the timing of my course is 6pm everyday and I have been staying in office till 9pm which creates a barrier to attend this term. Therefore, I would like to withdraw my continuity for this batch.
However, I would definitely wish to continue this course in the next intake which is in September. So, I would be grateful if you could refund my amount back or provide a approval receipt for taking it in next batch, either way is fine for me.
I am hoping to hear to your earliest.
Your's faithfully,
Anjana
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 61, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...g your attention that I cannot continue part time course Webservices Automation which I...
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Line 2, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that I cannot continue part time course Webservices Automation which I am doing ...
^^^
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... workload I have been assigned to and I couldnt complete in my office hours resulting t...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...oreover, the timing of my course is 6pm everyday and I have been staying in office till ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 69, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wish to continue this course in the next intake which is in September. So, I woul...
^^
Line 4, column 170, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... could refund my amount back or provide a approval receipt for taking it in next ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59259259259 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61104544178 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623456790123 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.3859460707 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257293802201 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109365153949 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605986169286 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146225322309 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682822523207 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.