You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board.
Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and
Give your reason for writing
Tell about your education
Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job.
Dear Mr. Walker,
This letter is regarding the post of Quality Assurance Manager in your company Accent Tech. My name is Amit and I am a student of Loren Brusque University. This opportunity came to my attention through our college notice board and hence I was very excited to apply for this post in your reputable company.
Currently, I am in Final year of my Masters in Business Administration. Moreover, this is the same university from where I have completed my Bachelors in Business Administration. After having completed my Bachelors with distinction, I managed to get a good score till the current semester of Masters.
Besides scoring well in education, getting more knowledge of practical work was important for me. Hence, I took a 6 months internship with T&T as a Junior Business Associate during my bachelors and 6 months internship as a Business Analyst in Infotech Limited during my Masters. Along with practical work experience and great enthusiasm for work, I also have required determination to be a part of your company. Hence, I would like to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager at your company.
Thanks for your consideration and awaiting your reply.
Yours Honestly,
Amit Azad
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, honestly, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1144278607 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98836468773 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577114427861 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 327.6 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.233329965 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6666666667 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252386661967 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097626972481 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610573296311 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140765708202 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489651813827 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.