You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and•Give you

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You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board.

Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and

• Give your reason for writing
• Tell about your education
• Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job.

Dear Sir/Madam,
I intend to write this letter to show my interest in the vacant position of the Quality Assurance Manager, advertised through the notice board. I am currently studying Business Administration at your university. Prior to this, I did my graduation in business administration, specializing in the quality assurance domain.
The evident reason for applying for this position is primarily my relevant experience and required academic background. I have worked in the capacity of the Quality assurance supervisor at a telecommunication company in London for about 3 years. At my previous job, my roles and responsibilities were quite similar to the job description provided with this vacancy. I used to evaluate the helpline calls and also made sure to do the calibration with agents upon their mistakes and shortcomings. My prime tasks were to form quality reports, identifying mistakes and recommending improvement areas. I also worked in the capacity of quality coach for the agents needed special training over soft-skills for handling aggressive customers. I consider myself quite suitable for this position as I have made a 60 days plan to improvise the quality evaluation measures and how I can bring value using my expertise.
It is, therefore, requested to consider me for this position.
Yours Truly,
Sam

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I intend to write this letter to show my...
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Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...der me for this position. Yours Truly, Sam
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 3.85567010309 415% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1126.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38755980861 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23868667317 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617224880383 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.391340345 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8333333333 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.91666666667 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141052124528 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560410854793 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453684284643 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102190093997 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694027666214 0.0580467560999 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 70.7449484536 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 8.71597938144 157% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 7.59969072165 127% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 41.2886597938 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.