Dear Steven,
Hope you are doing great buddy. It's been really long time since we met. However, soon we are going to break that streak as I have exciting news to share with you.
My application to London School of Economics is accepted and will be applying for Visa immediately as I receive Confirmation for acceptance of studies. As mentioned in curriculum brochure, Masters program duration is 2 years with 4 semesters. In total, there are 9 subjects of which 4 will be in 1st year and 2 months break between each term. Whereas, before that, I need your help in few matters like helping me to find a part-time job. According to my tutor, I will be eligible to work for 20 hours per week and full time during holidays.
As you must be aware, cost of living in London is far too much to bear and without extra money. Further, foreign working experience add credentials to my resume making my prospects even brighter. Alongwith that, earning few extra bucks in free time will be helpful to early closure of my education loan. Moreover, all corporate firms these days prefer candidates for pre-educational experience for offering a job. Hence, from all angles, it's for my best to engage in some internship activities during weekends.
Therefore, I request your advise and help for searching me a suitable job. As you have first hand experience with employment agencies, I thought you can pull some of your contacts and refer me to right opportunities. On the other hand, your expertise in tailoring curriculum vitae according to the type of job is none to second. On that account also, I request you to guide me in preparing my resume.
Thanks in advance and till we meet again bye.
Yours lovingly,
James
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in curriculum brochure, Masters program duration is 2 years with 4 semesters. In...
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Line 5, column 516, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...gible to work for 20 hours per week and full time during holidays. As you must be awar...
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Line 7, column 440, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...offering a job. Hence, from all angles, its for my best to engage in some internshi...
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Line 9, column 27, Rule ID: GIVE_ADVISE[3]
Message: Did you mean 'advice' (a noun)?
Suggestion: advice
... weekends. Therefore, I request your advise and help for searching me a suitable jo...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, moreover, really, second, so, therefore, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 26.3917525773 171% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 937.175257732 152% => OK
No of words: 298.0 206.0 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78859060403 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69053237503 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 127.690721649 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634228187919 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 290.88556701 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7987961235 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1052631579 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6842105263 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05263157895 4.34317383033 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217439409331 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649572155546 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543792688739 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10719504727 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703184274343 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 41.2886597938 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.