Physical and mental fitness in sports is equally important in sports, though some argue about their varying dependence for success in games. While few points out vitality of physical exercises for outdoor games like Rugby, Cricket, football and others criticise that underestimating mental attitude might fail the team to achieve their goal. In my opinion, a sports person should have dual support for winning a game. In this essay, I will enumerate few reasons to embrace both techniques.
Certainly, need of plyometrics to have flexible body movements is must for games which demands physical strength. Daily stretching, running keep our muscles contractions and movements trained enough for competitions. However, there is no reason to train our minds effectively for impregnable concentration. Afterall, becoming victorious is impossible without strategy and one should master it by doing yoga, meditation. On the other hand, we have work outs like jogging, push ups which will take care of healthy functioning of body. Players spend most of their time in gyms for preparing upcoming tournaments. According to research carried by famous sports magazine ESPN more than 60% gamers concentrate on body strength and forget about mental preparation resulting lack of concentration when they stressed out while playing. For instance, in World Cup match players lose their confidence when they are distracted by opponent’s performance and resulting drop- in performance rate. Hence, such movements strike again necessity of conscious awareness when we are on grand arena.
We also have some indoor games like chess, shooting where contestants highly depend upon mind as they need little or no physical strength. Nevertheless, they ignore benefits of some amount of exercise improves blood circulation to brain making neurons to activate cells. To explain, while sitting for an indoor game our posture restricts body movements making us lethargic. When we train our tissues and nerves to such conditions, they become equipped to work in odd conditions. Shooting though primarily seems to be an indoor game but requires lot physical training as along with concentration our body needs to tackle ricocheting energy of bullet. Abhinav bindra, Indian Olympic shooter stresses importance of arm strength for shooting as they need to carry heavy guns for long period. Chess also needs vertebrate support for managing balance as they need to sit for long periods.
Sustaining pleasant attitude whilst competing with rivalry team is art that one can learn from only bringing discipline to mind. Distinguishing needs of sports can only be fulfilled by applying proportional adjustments of physical and mental attitude. Some game might need more physical exercise but it should not exclude mental preparation and vice versa. In conclusion, irrespective nature of sports one should prepare himself for being aware of various sports techniques which are both physical and mental. Therefore, irrespective to nature of sports one should have basic vigour of mental and physical stability.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Message: Did you mean 'after all'?
Suggestion: After all
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1973.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49582172702 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84296194692 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643454038997 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3851639039 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.842105263 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8947368421 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0864297453915 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0268031264036 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407952850174 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753951386435 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700850852424 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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