Our love to listen music whether at work or home is fascinating. Traditional or International music their difference is 'not-so' visible because they basically speak language of soul. In words of Plato ''Music gives soul to the universe,wings to the mind,flight to the imagination and life to everything''. Apart, they both have certain degree of popularity among art lovers. However, without hesitance, I can say that traditional songs are more important than international albums. In this essay we will illustrate various aspects of both music and how we can relate to them.
Music is integral part of our culture and lifestyle. As quoted by famous
philosopher Friedrich Nietzsche '' without music , life would be a mistake''. Not only this, our festivals, weddings and celebrations are incomplete by absence of folk songs. In other words only music can express certain emotions where language alone cannot. We all grownup listening to national anthems and lullabies but as we open doors to new things our taste changes by time and our favourite music defines what we are. Without a doubt, international music is heard everywhere around the world. Whereas, they have their roots in traditional rythms and instruments from where they established.
While questioning which kind of music is most important, we should agree to the fact that traditional music helps people to relate their own culture and can be in touch with themselves. Moreover, interantional music comes from totally different surrondings which are alien to our mindsets. Furthermore, commerical and coporate interference destroy sanctity of lyrics and meaning. American pop music dominating European classical instruments is best example to define the scenario. In contrast, traditional music reflects our way of living, narratives of people who sacrificed their lives for country. During Indian Independence movement, despite of all diversity, it is music which united people of all background to fight against British regime.
Though we can argue that one type of music is more important than others but both are enjoyed by music lovers equally. Nevertheless, we can conclude topic, by saying that traditional music should be preserved as they are part of country's cultural identity.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39488636364 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94031068007 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.72486596 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4285714286 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7619047619 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.456632747231 0.244688304435 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14141788962 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943636054853 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271500010418 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747437526434 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ting. Traditional or International music their difference is not-so visible becau...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , wings
...f Plato Music gives soul to the universe,wings to the mind,flight to the imagination a...
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Suggestion: , flight
...s soul to the universe,wings to the mind,flight to the imagination and life to everythi...
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Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...lture and lifestyle. As quoted by famous philosopher Friedrich Nietzsche without...
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...famous philosopher Friedrich Nietzsche without music , life would be a mistake....
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...opher Friedrich Nietzsche without music , life would be a mistake. Not only this,...
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...nstruments from where they established. While questioning which kind of music is...
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Suggestion: is the best
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, whereas, while, in contrast, kind of, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39488636364 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94031068007 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.72486596 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4285714286 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7619047619 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.456632747231 0.244688304435 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14141788962 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943636054853 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271500010418 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747437526434 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.