You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
give details of your study plans
explain why you want to get a part-time job
suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Hello Peter,
Hey! How are you? Hope you are doing well in your new job. We haven’t contacted each other since a long time. Actually, I needed your help in getting me a part time job in your country.
As you know, I have been trying a lot to complete my Master’s education in the Harvard University and it’s a pleasure to let you know that I have finally got my admission. My Master’s degree in Psychology is for one year long and to be able to survive with my college fees and stay there, I will surely need a part time job to suffice the same.
Please let me know if I could get a job in the cafeteria where you were working previously when you had come to the city for the first time. It would be great if you share me the contact details of the recruiter in order to start my job as soon as I reach there.
I am really looking forward to meet you and know your city.
Yours faithfully,
Monica
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...lly, I needed your help in getting me a part time job in your country. As you know, I ...
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Line 5, column 326, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...es and stay there, I will surely need a part time job to suffice the same. Please let...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 29, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
... there. I am really looking forward to meet you and know your city. Yours faithf...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, first, if, look, really, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28813559322 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45050595022 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2960034105 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353730573485 0.216113520407 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159828912381 0.0766984524023 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838800364152 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230028160045 0.12726935374 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847163780809 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.