Some people believe that it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we care about them. Others think that there are better ways to show that we care about them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In today’s materialistic world, it is often believed by some that presenting gifts to your loved ones actually interprets your love and care towards them. Whereas, some are of the opinion that true care can be shown in small little deeds instead of relying on the material things. This essay will discuss the above debate in detail and give my conclusion at the end.
To start with, money being an essential part in today’s life, the ideology of someone spending money to purchase gifts ultimately leads to the conclusion that the person cares. Furthermore, in case of special occasions like festivals or birthdays, many of them gift each other presents to show how grateful they are to be in each other’s lives. Also, gifting a useful product for our relatives or friends creates a stronger bond of togetherness. Hence, making it obvious to display our affection via unique presents.
In spite of the above positives of gifting people, it is a well renowned fact that helping or being upright with someone in their crucial times is much more worthy than any other factor. Moreover, small gestures also play a big role in maintaining the relationship a bit stronger. For instance, calling up to know how the day was or asking about the current situations. In all, day-to-day conversations express a lot of care for our loved ones and help to be their mental support throughout.
Conclusively, although, people prefer the materialist stuffs, I opine that time is the most precious gift one should give to show their affection towards their loved ones. Physical and mental support is what people crave these days, and that is the best gift one can ever get.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rprets your love and care towards them. Whereas, some are of the opinion that true care...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat is the best gift one can ever get.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, for instance, in spite of, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95744680851 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69748861848 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63475177305 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5831833279 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.538461538 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223815739296 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653427256154 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564726791239 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126608576653 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627532019031 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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