You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a par-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
-give details of your study plans
-explain why you want to get a part-time job
-suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Joe,
Hi, how's it going so far? It's been an age to keep in touch. Nevertheless you left your hometown, I think we still have a good relationship. All friends miss you so much and I have a surprise news. Perhaps I will go to Australia, if I get a post-graduate school permission. I already told you before I was so confused between getting a job and studying abroad.
Then, I made a decision to study abroad rather than get a full-time job. However, my parents won't be able to afford my tuition fee as well as scholarship was failed so that I don't think I have enough money to afford entire semesters with my savings. One thing you can do is by gathering a job list brochure or leaflet you have. The other option is that let me know all websites such as Linkedin. As you know, all countries have their own job seeker sites.
Lastly, maybe your advise or tips can help me more than others. Additionally, I'm looking for not full-time jobs but part-time jobs as an international student.
I'm hoping that you reply as soon as possible.
Best wishes,
MJ
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 6, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: how's
Dear Joe, Hi, hows it going so far? Its been an age to kee...
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Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
... far? Its been an age to keep in touch. Nevertheless you left your hometown, I think we stil...
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Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ell as scholarship was failed so that I dont think I have enough money to afford ent...
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Line 7, column 21, Rule ID: GIVE_ADVISE[3]
Message: Did you mean 'advice' (a noun)?
Suggestion: advice
...ob seeker sites. Lastly, maybe your advise or tips can help me more than others. A...
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Line 7, column 80, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...help me more than others. Additionally, Im looking for not full-time jobs but part...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...e jobs as an international student. Im hoping that you reply as soon as possib...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, lastly, look, may, nevertheless, so, still, then, well, i think, such as, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 26.3917525773 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48717948718 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66378542571 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697435897436 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1306134305 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.3333333333 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 4.34317383033 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299400555145 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094183835805 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821581807969 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17246943556 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532996293997 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.87 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.