You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter:
Explain why you want to do the voluntary work.
State what your skills and experience are.
Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter regaring the voluntary work which it is held in a developing country. I would like to apply a teaching Englsh position that I was majoring when I was an undergraduate student. And as registerring a master course with same module, I believe I am the most suitable person among applicants. Especially, donating my talent within my field of study is an honor to share and bring me achievements.
The one thing is that the charity needs someone who speaks english fluently, and the other option is required who experienced before by contributing their abilities to others. As I said, my major is english linguistics and I have been undergoing to teach children dropout because of their situations. Additionally, many locations you have can be chosen so that I think I perfertly fit into going China. Due to my all relatives live there and I'm bilingual Chinese and Enlgish. New job starts after two month later, so I possibly help you as soon as possible until then.
There are some reasons why I have to be picked, therefore if you interested my offer please let me know. I will be waiting for you with big smiles.
Best wishes,
MJ
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 443, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... Due to my all relatives live there and Im bilingual Chinese and Enlgish. New job ...
^^
Line 5, column 502, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...e and Enlgish. New job starts after two month later, so I possibly help you as soon a...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for you with big smiles. Best wishes, MJ
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, therefore, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74634146341 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79903952253 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.712195121951 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8640660785 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0833333333 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172033528815 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530958481301 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557212140288 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108676864194 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171246108298 0.0580467560999 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.