Being a celebrity - such as famous film star or sports personality - brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Bringing problems through being entertainment is one of the most controversial issues that people like debating about because there are some reasons between advantages and disadvantages which are asked plenty of time whose fame got spread. In this essay, I will address both views and a bad influence on societies.
Firstly, I believe that becoming a celeb has aggravated their personality badly and could spoil themselves. For instance, according to many gossips from periodical magazines, they have been saying a growing number of celebrities such as actors, comedians and sports stars who endangered with their position because of their behavior. Moreover, a good reputation is the most essential part of getting a significant role.
On the other hand, celebrities enjoy huge fan-following. Their fans regard them as role models and look up to them and follow their actions religiously. they do this with the hope of reaching the same level as their role models. sports personalities like Roger Federer and Lionel Messi have numerous fans all over the world. Millions of children aspire to become champions like them. Thus it is evident how fame elevates a person’s social standing.
On the flip side, at times famous people can become victims of privacy invasion by their fans; such incidents, however, do not affect all of them. some celebrities guard their privacy. others don’t mind living in the limelight all the time. they enjoy the adulation they get.
To conclude, there are several benefits to being a celebrity. After analysing how fame makes a person rich and a role model for many, it is not hard to see that being a celebrity is an advantage, not a disadvantage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, so, thus, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17391304348 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81992080937 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.181496244 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2352941176 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179479735995 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486945904301 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468216334699 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967239134015 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376836313338 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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